Comments on: Unattainable Freedom

By: cordieb

cordieb — Tue, 09 Sep 2008 20:34:58 +0000

Great writing. I believe freedom is always attainable if it is truly our desire. PLL, CordieB.

By: the.I.inside

the.I.inside — Thu, 07 Aug 2008 09:12:19 +0000

My heart was beating so fast, while i read it, I totally loved it, and I felt for the girl in it, again WOW

By: Mental Mist

Mental Mist — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 13:33:43 +0000

depressingly possible … and stunningly written !

By: PaLoMiNo

PaLoMiNo — Sun, 01 Jun 2008 10:37:42 +0000

amazing! keep it up!

By: tant

tant — Thu, 22 May 2008 21:46:10 +0000

How desireous.
;^)

By: Disturbed Stranger

Disturbed Stranger — Thu, 22 May 2008 17:41:04 +0000

q8tia- shhhhh! (see? I replied )

Nymphadora- I already told a certain reader I don’t believe in “battered person syndrome” when she insisted that the woman should kill the jailor… Now I ask you…hmmmm….. why do you want her dead/dumped/hated?

By: Nymphadora

Nymphadora — Thu, 22 May 2008 16:46:32 +0000

WHAT? faj2a she’s back to square one? i demand a more disturbed ending ….finish it….write a twisted ending….and i don’t like her that much…so kill her or at least hurt her….you know what!? better.. make him hate her and dump her :p

By: q8tia

q8tia — Thu, 22 May 2008 16:12:16 +0000

wa ya7obich 7eg il disturbed :*
C’mon!!! New Post!

By: Disturbed Stranger

Disturbed Stranger — Thu, 22 May 2008 15:00:22 +0000

Lily- I needed a new start… for a new beginning…

naughtycorner07- No, they are different stories, poems, descriptives…etc.

Silver- Thank you.

Pure hatred- disturbingly-ever-after?

By: Pure Hatred

Pure Hatred — Thu, 22 May 2008 13:59:42 +0000

GREAT ENDING! Totally not expected!
Not a happily-ever-after person are you? Very very very well done.
Excited about the next story. Keep them coming.